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Working on a blurb, pitch and concept.


I would appreciate any input you have and I welcome your criticism and suggestions. Thank you.

Unethical lawyer & corrupt, immoral fertility doctor join forces to create designer babies adopted to highest bidder


A prosecutor in rural Louisiana is forced to choose between an innocent woman's execution and losing her adopted son.

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Kate Leblanc an ambitious, by the book prosecutor uncovers concealed evidence which exonerates someone she convicted of murder and implicates those closest to her.

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When Kate Leblanc uncovers evidence exonerating someone she convicted of murder she must solve the case even when all clues lead to people she loves.

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While trying to free a woman she wrongfully convicted of murder, Kate Leblanc exposes a black market adoption ring and must choose between the law and family when her own son's adoption is jeopardized.

4 comments:

  1. Thanks for visiting my blog. I missed yours during the A to Z Challenge, but I'm here visiting now. I love this concept -- A prosecutor in rural Louisiana is forced to choose between an innocent woman's execution and losing her adopted son.

    Dena
    http://denapawling.blogspot.com/

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  2. Thank you Dean. I didn't see this comment before. My bad. I appreciate your input on my potential blurb or elevator pitch

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  3. I'm passing through on the Roadtrip too - started out well but still have a lot of blogs to visit. Good luck with the novel.

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  4. Hi, Melissa: I like the last blurb best. It's concise, punchy, and a very good one-line pitch.
    --Michael

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